Writing Poverty

Hello this week we have been choosing a goal for writing and one of those goals were based on poverty and we are nearly at the point where we have to write speeches and I chose to choose the goal on poverty.

710

Do you see that number that is 7 hundred and 10 and that is the income of a place in west Africa this is the poorest place in 2020 there is 4.8 million people and $710 dollars is final income for the year.

Rhetorical question

What is going to happen if the world loses all its money?

What if we all went homeless?

What if people can’t afford to pay their kids education? 

Writing Week 1 Term 2

Hello this week for writing we have been doing a plot on Hansel and Gretel and we had to use some words to describe the house and we had to use some different words to describe.

Eerie

Cruel

Scary 

Evil

Terrorising

 

Good sentences to reel in the reader.

Plot 1

As I am entering The forest

A delicate coconut chocolate fragrance getting pushed by the wind to the center of my nose.

As I looked around I froze to the sight of the forest in dark and horror.The leaves in the forest are as crunchy as chips. The wind paused for a moment and started again. As I see a trail it leads to a Sugar coated house, I don’t believe my eyes. Suddenly the wind started to pick up like I wasn’t supposed to be there. As I move away from the house it calms down. And well I’m in a bush. I'm looking at the house to see how tall and crunchy the chimney looks and the door made out of sweet foods. The sun is going down and the only light is coming from the window inside the house. I needed to get to that house to see what's going on there so  I approached the house and then the wind started to pick up again so I knew I wasn’t supposed to be there. I smell the chocolate fragrance again that is coming from the crunchy chewy chimney. The door randomly slammed open and out walks a woman The lady looks old.

Plot 2

Writing DLO

Hello this week for writing we have been looking at complex sentences and we got to be in a group and write a script for a play that includes complex sentences and we got to share it to the class in the workshop and we did one on a scrap.

Writing

Hello this week for writing we got to write like a short story but we had to include a bit of a pobble for some ideas and my story was based on some friends that were building a bunker for a tornado but suddenly a tornado hits the county that they are in but the bunker isn't ready to be stayed in because they haven't finished so it wouldn't be safe to stay in.

Writing Blog

Hello this week we have been doing writing and we signed up to the workshop of that would suit our goals and for writing we had to write the purpose of why it is important to write reports.
Here is my report