Eerie
Cruel
Scary
Evil
Terrorising
Good sentences to reel in the reader.
Plot 1
As I am entering The forest
A delicate coconut chocolate fragrance getting pushed by the wind to the center of my nose.
As I looked around I froze to the sight of the forest in dark and horror.The leaves in the forest are as crunchy as chips. The wind paused for a moment and started again. As I see a trail it leads to a Sugar coated house, I don’t believe my eyes. Suddenly the wind started to pick up like I wasn’t supposed to be there. As I move away from the house it calms down. And well I’m in a bush. I'm looking at the house to see how tall and crunchy the chimney looks and the door made out of sweet foods. The sun is going down and the only light is coming from the window inside the house. I needed to get to that house to see what's going on there so I approached the house and then the wind started to pick up again so I knew I wasn’t supposed to be there. I smell the chocolate fragrance again that is coming from the crunchy chewy chimney. The door randomly slammed open and out walks a woman The lady looks old.
Plot 2
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